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    Jayden, The War Path

    Post by Wave Darkbright on Thu Dec 18, 2014 6:47 am

    Summon Name: Jayden, The War Path
    Summon Rank: Master Tier 1
    Description:
    Jayden:
    All of Wave's summons are part of a set called "The Six Paths of Power". Each summon in this set is not to be considered a summon but more like an extension of Wave himself. They have no real personality but they will talk to Wave, each other, and opponents. The summons all share vision with Wave and each other meaning, they have 7 separate fields of vision that can be seen by all of them. Any summonings by any of the paths also add to their field of vision with however many more view points.


    Ability/Spell name: Crouching Tiger
    Rank: Master
    Description: The user places a palm facing forward in front of their face with one hand and then taps it with his other hand, formed into a fist, which creates a massive amount of air pressure. Next, the user forms a unique hand seal resembling a tiger. This launches the air pressure at the opponent in the shape of one, up to 80 meters by leaving a gigantic tiger-shaped impression into the initially built-up air pressure with the hand seal. The air pressure will condense as it's moving and be focused into a single point, meaning it will hit one singular target. The technique then explodes on command, releasing the built up air pressure in an instant. A massive explosion — one that is 40 meters in radius  — is created which can be felt a significant distance away, however since the explosion and tiger impression is only air it is for the most part cosmetic other than some strong winds.
    Duration and Cooldown: Instant duration, 5 post cooldown
    Strength: Causes massive physical damage, can be mistaken for magic
    Weakness: Can only hit a single target area that cannot exceed 5 meters in radius

    Ability/Spell name: Gate of Opening
    Rank: Master
    Description: The Gate of Opening, located in the brain, removes the restraints of the brain on the muscles so 100% of the user's strength can be used whereas normally, a person can only use 20% of their muscles' strength to keep them from disintegrating. This makes the user's strength go up by two tiers.
    Duration and Cooldown: 5 post duration, 7 post cooldown
    Strength: Increases strength
    Weakness: Can only be used on Jayden, cant use other techniques for 1 post after this one is over.

    Ability/Spell name: High Nigh Triceratops
    Description: The user focuses energy into their skin as they make it almost as hard as steel. This allows the user to absorb up to 2 Master level damage attacks, as well as boost their endurance by 2 tiers. However if an abilities tier is still higher than Jayden's, it can break this ability in one spell.
    Duration and Cooldown: 6 post duration, 7 post cooldown
    Strength: Protects user from damage. User can be used as a shield from damage
    Weakness: Can only be cast on self. If an abilities tier is still higher than Jayden's, it can break this ability in one spell.


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    Re: Jayden, The War Path

    Post by Fabled Emperor Karna on Fri Dec 19, 2014 4:02 pm

    Edits in 'red'

    Wave Darkbright wrote:Summon Name: Jayden, The War Path
    Summon Rank: Master Tier 1
    Description:
    Jayden:
    All of Wave's summons are part of a set called "The Six Paths of Power". Each summon in this set is not to be considered a summon but more like an extension of Wave himself. This means that they are not affected by any spells that are aimed directly at summons such as de-summoning spells. ((remove the de-summon thing)) They have no real personality but they will talk to Wave, each other, and opponents. The summons all share vision with Wave and each other meaning, they have 7 separate fields of vision that can be seen by all of them. Any summonings by any of the paths also add to their field of vision with however many more view points.


    Ability/Spell name: Crouching Tiger
    Rank: Master
    Description: The user places a palm facing forward in front of their face with one hand and then taps it with his other hand, formed into a fist, which creates a massive amount of air pressure. Next, the user forms a unique hand seal resembling a tiger. This launches the air pressure at the opponent in the shape of one, up to 80 meters by leaving a gigantic tiger-shaped impression into the initially built-up air pressure with the hand seal. The air pressure will condense as it's moving and be focused into a single point. The technique then explodes on command, releasing the built up air pressure in an instant. A massive explosion — one that is 40 meters in radius  — is created which can be felt a significant distance away. ((if I am not mistaken, like you said the 'impression' is cosmetic just to look cool so the actual ability of this seems fine.))
    Duration and Cooldown: Instant duration, 5 post cooldown
    Strength: Causes massive physical damage, can be mistaken for magic
    Weakness: Is not magic at all ((this isn't a weakness at all.))

    Ability/Spell name: Gate of Opening
    Rank: Master
    Description: The Gate of Opening, located in the brain, removes the restraints of the brain on the muscles so 100% of the user's strength can be used whereas normally, a person can only use 20% of their muscles' strength to keep them from disintegrating. This makes the user's strength go up by one rank. ((Going up a rank would mean that his strength goes from Master tier 1 to Transcender tier 1, I think by now you understand that, that's far out of the bounds of stat boosting abilities, please conform this ability to boosting up to only 2 tiers in strength.))
    Duration and Cooldown: 5 post duration, 6 post cooldown ((I would like to see a little higher cd if its a 5 post duration))
    Strength: Increases strength
    Weakness: Can only be used on Jayden, cant use other techniques for 1 post after this one is over.

    Ability/Spell name: High Nigh Triceratops
    Description: The user focuses energy into their skin as they make it almost as hard as steel. This allows the user to absorb up to 3 Master level damage attacks. ((I think this ability should also state that is boosts your endurance by +2 tiers so that it makes sense. Also I think that taking 2 master tier abilities without damage should suffice, remember though that if the abilities tier is still higher than yours, It can break this ability in one spell.))
    Duration and Cooldown: 6 post duration, 7 post cooldown
    Strength: Protects user from damage. User can be used as a shield from damage
    Weakness: Can only be cast on self.
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    Re: Jayden, The War Path

    Post by Wave Darkbright on Fri Dec 19, 2014 4:25 pm

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    Re: Jayden, The War Path

    Post by Fabled Emperor Karna on Fri Dec 19, 2014 4:31 pm

    Wave Darkbright wrote:Summon Name: Jayden, The War Path
    Summon Rank: Master Tier 1
    Description:
    Jayden:
    All of Wave's summons are part of a set called "The Six Paths of Power". Each summon in this set is not to be considered a summon but more like an extension of Wave himself. They have no real personality but they will talk to Wave, each other, and opponents. The summons all share vision with Wave and each other meaning, they have 7 separate fields of vision that can be seen by all of them. Any summonings by any of the paths also add to their field of vision with however many more view points.


    Ability/Spell name: Crouching Tiger
    Rank: Master
    Description: The user places a palm facing forward in front of their face with one hand and then taps it with his other hand, formed into a fist, which creates a massive amount of air pressure. Next, the user forms a unique hand seal resembling a tiger. This launches the air pressure at the opponent in the shape of one, up to 80 meters by leaving a gigantic tiger-shaped impression into the initially built-up air pressure with the hand seal. The air pressure will condense as it's moving and be focused into a single point, meaning it will hit one singular target. The technique then explodes on command, releasing the built up air pressure in an instant. A massive explosion — one that is 40 meters in radius  — is created which can be felt a significant distance away, however since the explosion and tiger impression is only air it is for the most part cosmetic other than some strong winds.
    Duration and Cooldown: Instant duration, 5 post cooldown
    Strength: Causes massive physical damage, can be mistaken for magic
    Weakness: Can only hit a single target area that cannot exceed 5 meters in radius

    Ability/Spell name: Gate of Opening
    Rank: Master
    Description: The Gate of Opening, located in the brain, removes the restraints of the brain on the muscles so 100% of the user's strength can be used whereas normally, a person can only use 20% of their muscles' strength to keep them from disintegrating. This makes the user's strength go up by two tiers.
    Duration and Cooldown: 5 post duration, 7 post cooldown
    Strength: Increases strength
    Weakness: Can only be used on Jayden, cant use other techniques for 1 post after this one is over.

    Ability/Spell name: High Nigh Triceratops
    Description: The user focuses energy into their skin as they make it almost as hard as steel. This allows the user to absorb up to 2 Master level damage attacks, as well as boost their endurance by 2 tiers. However if an abilities tier is still higher than Jayden's, it can break this ability in one spell. (("However if an abilities tier is still higher than Jayden's, it can break this ability in one spell." also throw this in the weakness. just to give you a pro-tip here. Even if it is described in your description, things that would be considered strengths should also be put in the strength section and things such as this one which would be considered a weakness should be added to the weakness section. Add that to the weakness section and then all these abilities should be good to go.))
    Duration and Cooldown: 6 post duration, 7 post cooldown
    Strength: Protects user from damage. User can be used as a shield from damage
    Weakness: Can only be cast on self.
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    Re: Jayden, The War Path

    Post by Wave Darkbright on Fri Dec 19, 2014 4:40 pm

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    Re: Jayden, The War Path

    Post by Fabled Emperor Karna on Fri Dec 19, 2014 4:42 pm

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    Wave Darkbright wrote:Summon Name: Jayden, The War Path
    Summon Rank: Master Tier 1
    Description:
    Jayden:
    All of Wave's summons are part of a set called "The Six Paths of Power". Each summon in this set is not to be considered a summon but more like an extension of Wave himself. They have no real personality but they will talk to Wave, each other, and opponents. The summons all share vision with Wave and each other meaning, they have 7 separate fields of vision that can be seen by all of them. Any summonings by any of the paths also add to their field of vision with however many more view points.


    Ability/Spell name: Crouching Tiger
    Rank: Master
    Description: The user places a palm facing forward in front of their face with one hand and then taps it with his other hand, formed into a fist, which creates a massive amount of air pressure. Next, the user forms a unique hand seal resembling a tiger. This launches the air pressure at the opponent in the shape of one, up to 80 meters by leaving a gigantic tiger-shaped impression into the initially built-up air pressure with the hand seal. The air pressure will condense as it's moving and be focused into a single point, meaning it will hit one singular target. The technique then explodes on command, releasing the built up air pressure in an instant. A massive explosion — one that is 40 meters in radius  — is created which can be felt a significant distance away, however since the explosion and tiger impression is only air it is for the most part cosmetic other than some strong winds.
    Duration and Cooldown: Instant duration, 5 post cooldown
    Strength: Causes massive physical damage, can be mistaken for magic
    Weakness: Can only hit a single target area that cannot exceed 5 meters in radius

    Ability/Spell name: Gate of Opening
    Rank: Master
    Description: The Gate of Opening, located in the brain, removes the restraints of the brain on the muscles so 100% of the user's strength can be used whereas normally, a person can only use 20% of their muscles' strength to keep them from disintegrating. This makes the user's strength go up by two tiers.
    Duration and Cooldown: 5 post duration, 7 post cooldown
    Strength: Increases strength
    Weakness: Can only be used on Jayden, cant use other techniques for 1 post after this one is over.

    Ability/Spell name: High Nigh Triceratops
    Description: The user focuses energy into their skin as they make it almost as hard as steel. This allows the user to absorb up to 2 Master level damage attacks, as well as boost their endurance by 2 tiers. However if an abilities tier is still higher than Jayden's, it can break this ability in one spell.
    Duration and Cooldown: 6 post duration, 7 post cooldown
    Strength: Protects user from damage. User can be used as a shield from damage
    Weakness: Can only be cast on self. If an abilities tier is still higher than Jayden's, it can break this ability in one spell.

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