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    Kinala, The Evoker Path

    Post by Wave Darkbright on Thu Dec 18, 2014 6:48 am

    Summon Name: Kinala, The Evoker Path
    Summon Rank: Master
    Description:
    Kinala, The Evoker Path:
    All of Wave's summons are part of a set called "The Six Paths of Power". Each summon in this set is not to be considered a summon but more like an extension of Wave himself. They have no real personality but they will talk to Wave, each other, and opponents. The summons all share vision with Wave and each other meaning, they have 7 separate fields of vision that can be seen by all of them. Any summonings by any of the paths also add to their field of vision with however many more view points.


    Ability/Spell name: Time Zone Shield
    Rank: Master
    Description: The user makes a shield around something that has been destroyed or damaged. Once the shield is cast inside that limited area that can not exceed 40 meter radius, the user reverses time to restore the person, place or thing to its original form/state. The subject could have been destroyed at any time within a 24 hour period and it will still be restored. When dealing with restoring characters the spell can recover Novice Tier damage completely and heal half the damage caused by a Master Tier spell.
    Duration and Cooldown: Instant duration, 5 post cooldown
    Strength:Can restore/heal anything
    Weakness: Cant be used to revive the dead

    Ability/Spell name: Kinala's Love
    Rank: Master
    Description: By focusing on up to two targets, Kinala is able to give them a buff in strength and speed. This means she is able to give up to 2 people a buff, one gets a buff to speed while the other gets one to strength. If she performs this on one person the person gets both 1 tier buffs.
    Duration and Cooldown:6 Post duration, 7 post cooldown
    Strength: Stat buff
    Weakness: If used on two people the buff isnt as effective. Cannot be used on self

    Ability/Spell name: Catastrophic Planetary Construction
    Rank: Master
    Description: The user releases a black sphere from his hands which acts as a centre of gravity, drawing in everything in its surroundings to create an enormous satellite-like construct. It draws in everything within a 40 meter radius, except people the target chooses to be unaffected and it also draws it the target(s). This construct is marked with the kanji for "Seal" on the front of it. It is then used to seal the target(s) within the satellite, for 5 post. Once the satellites seal someone they are cast up 80 meters straight into the air. The satellite can be broken with a master ranked ability.
    Duration and Cooldown: 1 post charge up, 5 post duration, 6 post cooldown
    Strength: Seals a target
    Weakness: Can be destroyed by a master ranked ability


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    Re: Kinala, The Evoker Path

    Post by Tobirama Endou on Fri Dec 19, 2014 2:07 pm

    "This means that they are not affected by any spells that are aimed directly at summons such as de-summoning spells."

    They may be different than summons but in the end they ARE still summons. That should be removed."

    My problems with 'Time Zone Shield' are as followed:
    "reverses time to restore the person, place or thing tits original form/state."
    Basically no matter the injury you can heal it completely. Whether it be a loss of an arm, leg, or even the head, or even if they were blown to tiny Majin Buu pieces you could restore it(assuming they didn't die). Not only that though, but you can do it every 5 posts.


    "The subject could have been destroyed at any time and it will still be restored."
    I would say you have to heal them in that same 24 hour time span. LASTLY, refer to the healing tier chart thingy. It says what damage you can heal at what rank I believe. I know your ability is time, but you're using it like a healing spell, so it will be treated as such. (Also increase the cooldown to 7 posts.)



    As for Kinala's love: "By focusing on up to two targets, Kinala is able to give them a total buff. This means she is able to give up to 2 people a buff in all attributes up to 1 tier higher. If she performs this on one person the buff can be two tiers higher."

    A stat buff is touchy because there are Transcender spells that can boost your power by 1 tier so it's hard to judge what's actually allowed to boost what for what ranks. I'll talk this over with Oski and see if we can come to an agreement. Also, "Does no damage" is not a weakness. You don't have to do damage for a spell to be strong. You have the ability to boost 1 person up 2 tiers. That basically allows that person, aka your character(because we know it's being used on him) to fight a transcender ranked person with little to no effort, or two with a struggle/possible loss or boost 2 people up a tier, which is even worse.

    Planetary Destruction: How on earth does it make sense that it takes a Transcender powered ability to beat a Master ability? A Master ability can beat a Master Ability. You also can't lock someone in that thing for an entire topic. Maybe for 3 posts or so to get them out of the way while you tend to other matters? Also for the weakness, being broken by a Transcender ability, or even a master ability is not a weakness. That's just normal. Everyone has that weakness. Come up with a real one. lol


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    Re: Kinala, The Evoker Path

    Post by Fabled Emperor Karna on Fri Dec 19, 2014 3:35 pm

    Since Jay requested I check this, imma take this over. Sorreh Bro.
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    Re: Kinala, The Evoker Path

    Post by Fabled Emperor Karna on Fri Dec 19, 2014 3:44 pm

    Alright, edits in 'red'

    Wave Darkbright wrote:Summon Name: Kinala, The Evoker Path
    Summon Rank: Master
    Description:
    Kinala, The Evoker Path:
    All of Wave's summons are part of a set called "The Six Paths of Power". Each summon in this set is not to be considered a summon but more like an extension of Wave himself. This means that they are not affected by any spells that are aimed directly at summons such as de-summoning spells. ((De-summons are a no-no, I do not allow de-summons for actual summon's. If it's like a normal ability the summons like 5 skeletons they can be dispelled but actual summons cannot, remove this)) They have no real personality but they will talk to Wave, each other, and opponents. The summons all share vision with Wave and each other meaning, they have 7 separate fields of vision that can be seen by all of them. ((what do you mean by 7 separate fields of vision?)) Any summonings by any of the paths also add to their field of vision with however many more view points.


    Ability/Spell name: Time Zone Shield
    Rank: Master
    Description: The user makes a shield around something that has been destroyed or damaged. Once the shield is cast inside that limited area that can not exceed 40 meter radius, the user reverses time to restore the person, place or thing tits original form/state. The subject could have been destroyed at any time and it will still be restored. ((Basically this spell cannot be approved at all in it's current state, make this conform with Master tier healing abilities))
    Duration and Cooldown: Instant duration, 5 post cooldown
    Strength:Can restore/heal anything
    Weakness: Cant be used to revive the dead

    Ability/Spell name: Kinala's Love
    Rank: Master
    Description: By focusing on up to two targets, Kinala is able to give them a total buff. This means she is able to give up to 2 people a buff in all attributes up to 1 tier higher. If she performs this on one person the buff can be two tiers higher. ((Reading this has me very confused. Do you mean to say that this is a tier or rank buff? A rank buff would be 'all attributes' of a person. And if the case is that you mean rank then this ability won't get approved how it is either. At most you are only able to upgrade up to two different aspects of a tier unless this is your 'god only full tier rank up ability or weapon' in which case, this could only target one person. HOWEVER, the problem with that is that it must be YOUR characters weapon or ability for the full rank up, so this summon cannot have it either way.))
    Duration and Cooldown:6 Post duration, 7 post cooldown
    Strength: Stat buff
    Weakness: Does no damage

    Ability/Spell name: Catastrophic Planetary Construction
    Rank: Master
    Description: The user releases a black sphere from his hands which acts as a centre of gravity, drawing in everything in its surroundings to create an enormous satellite-like construct. It draws in everything within a 40 meter radius, except people the target chooses to be unaffected and it also draws it the target(s). This construct is marked with the kanji for "Seal" on the front of it. It is then used to seal the target(s) within the satellite, for the duration of the thread unless broken. Once the satellites seal someone they are cast up 80 meters straight into the air. The satellite can be broken with a transcender ranked ability. ((This last sentence is the only thing wrong with this ability I suppose though there should be more added, I want to fix major problems before we get into the fine details of these abilities. This ability should say "The satellite can be broken with a Master rank ability" since this is not a Transcender rank ability.))
    Duration and Cooldown: 1 post charge up, Instant duration, 6 post cooldown
    Strength: Seals a target
    Weakness: Can be destroyed by a transcender ranked ability
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    Re: Kinala, The Evoker Path

    Post by Wave Darkbright on Fri Dec 19, 2014 4:12 pm

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    Re: Kinala, The Evoker Path

    Post by Fabled Emperor Karna on Fri Dec 19, 2014 4:21 pm

    Edits in 'red'

    Wave Darkbright wrote:Summon Name: Kinala, The Evoker Path
    Summon Rank: Master
    Description:
    Kinala, The Evoker Path:
    All of Wave's summons are part of a set called "The Six Paths of Power". Each summon in this set is not to be considered a summon but more like an extension of Wave himself. They have no real personality but they will talk to Wave, each other, and opponents. The summons all share vision with Wave and each other meaning, they have 7 separate fields of vision that can be seen by all of them. Any summonings by any of the paths also add to their field of vision with however many more view points.


    Ability/Spell name: Time Zone Shield
    Rank: Master
    Description: The user makes a shield around something that has been destroyed or damaged. Once the shield is cast inside that limited area that can not exceed 40 meter radius, the user reverses time to restore the person, place or thing to its original form/state, up to the spells rank in damage. It however cannot restore cut off or destroyed limbs. The subject could have been destroyed at any time within a 24 hour period and it will still be restored. (("Master Tier Healing spells can highly influence the health of the target, healing spells can recover Novice Tier damage completely and heal half the damage caused by a Master Tier spell." You still need to fix this, I am fine with things that aren't characters such as buildings and plant life/earth/surroundings to be restored the way the ability states.))
    Duration and Cooldown: Instant duration, 5 post cooldown
    Strength:Can restore/heal anything
    Weakness: Cant be used to revive the dead

    Ability/Spell name: Kinala's Love
    Rank: Master
    Description: By focusing on up to two targets, Kinala is able to give them a buff in strength and speed. This means she is able to give up to 2 people a buff in those attributes up to 1 tier higher. If she performs this on one person the buff can be two tiers higher. ((if I am reading this right, over all this ability can either give 2 people +1 strength and +1 speed which is a total of 4 actually, or it gives one person +2 in strength and +2 tiers in speed which is also 4. You can only buff for up to +2 so both of these amounts need to be cut in half if you want it to work.))
    Duration and Cooldown:6 Post duration, 7 post cooldown
    Strength: Stat buff
    Weakness: Does no damage ((this needs a real weakness))

    Ability/Spell name: Catastrophic Planetary Construction
    Rank: Master
    Description: The user releases a black sphere from his hands which acts as a centre of gravity, drawing in everything in its surroundings to create an enormous satellite-like construct. It draws in everything within a 40 meter radius, except people the target chooses to be unaffected and it also draws it the target(s). This construct is marked with the kanji for "Seal" on the front of it. It is then used to seal the target(s) within the satellite, for the duration of the thread unless broken. ((Abilities can't last forever, you will have to give a post amount for how long this satellite will deteriorate and break on its own.)) Once the satellites seal someone they are cast up 80 meters straight into the air. The satellite can be broken with a master ranked ability.
    Duration and Cooldown: 1 post charge up, Instant duration, 6 post cooldown
    Strength: Seals a target
    Weakness: Can be destroyed by a transcender ranked ability
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    Re: Kinala, The Evoker Path

    Post by Wave Darkbright on Fri Dec 19, 2014 4:38 pm

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    Re: Kinala, The Evoker Path

    Post by Fabled Emperor Karna on Fri Dec 19, 2014 5:42 pm

    Approved~

    Wave Darkbright wrote:Summon Name: Kinala, The Evoker Path
    Summon Rank: Master
    Description:
    Kinala, The Evoker Path:
    All of Wave's summons are part of a set called "The Six Paths of Power". Each summon in this set is not to be considered a summon but more like an extension of Wave himself. They have no real personality but they will talk to Wave, each other, and opponents. The summons all share vision with Wave and each other meaning, they have 7 separate fields of vision that can be seen by all of them. Any summonings by any of the paths also add to their field of vision with however many more view points.


    Ability/Spell name: Time Zone Shield
    Rank: Master
    Description: The user makes a shield around something that has been destroyed or damaged. Once the shield is cast inside that limited area that can not exceed 40 meter radius, the user reverses time to restore the person, place or thing to its original form/state. The subject could have been destroyed at any time within a 24 hour period and it will still be restored. When dealing with restoring characters the spell can recover Novice Tier damage completely and heal half the damage caused by a Master Tier spell.
    Duration and Cooldown: Instant duration, 5 post cooldown
    Strength:Can restore/heal anything
    Weakness: Cant be used to revive the dead

    Ability/Spell name: Kinala's Love
    Rank: Master
    Description: By focusing on up to two targets, Kinala is able to give them a buff in strength and speed. This means she is able to give up to 2 people a buff, one gets a buff to speed while the other gets one to strength. If she performs this on one person the person gets both 1 tier buffs.
    Duration and Cooldown:6 Post duration, 7 post cooldown
    Strength: Stat buff
    Weakness: If used on two people the buff isnt as effective. Cannot be used on self

    Ability/Spell name: Catastrophic Planetary Construction
    Rank: Master
    Description: The user releases a black sphere from his hands which acts as a centre of gravity, drawing in everything in its surroundings to create an enormous satellite-like construct. It draws in everything within a 40 meter radius, except people the target chooses to be unaffected and it also draws it the target(s). This construct is marked with the kanji for "Seal" on the front of it. It is then used to seal the target(s) within the satellite, for 5 post. Once the satellites seal someone they are cast up 80 meters straight into the air. The satellite can be broken with a master ranked ability.
    Duration and Cooldown: 1 post charge up, 5 post duration, 6 post cooldown
    Strength: Seals a target
    Weakness: Can be destroyed by a master ranked ability

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