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    Wave Darkbright

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    Post by Wave Darkbright on Fri Dec 19, 2014 6:56 pm

    Name: Limbo Shadow
    Rank: Master
    Description: The user projects shadows of themselves into the invisible world known as Limbo, which is generally impossible to detect or visually perceive. The shadows can operate independently of the user, attacking and restraining target(s) or defending the original body from harm. To the naked eye, anything the clone does appears to be the act of an invisible force. The user is also capable of switching places with his shadows at any time. Although they are invulnerable to most physical attacks, techniques which make use dark magic are able to harm the shadows.
    Duration and cooldown: 4 Post duration, 5 post duration
    Strengths: Cannot be seen or sensed or harmed by physical attacks
    Weakness: The shadows can be partially combated by immobilizing or sealing the body in a way that it cannot move or act. They cannot use techniques of the user.
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    Fabled Emperor Karna
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    Re: New Spell

    Post by Fabled Emperor Karna on Tue Dec 23, 2014 10:55 pm

    Edits in 'red'

    Wave Darkbright wrote:Name: Limbo Shadow
    Rank: Master
    Description: The user projects shadows of themselves into the invisible world known as Limbo, which is generally impossible to detect or visually perceive. ((Basically what your saying is that it is impossible to see this ability? If so, your going to have to remove that. Invisible stuff is a no-no.)) The shadows can operate independently of the user, attacking and restraining target(s) or defending the original body from harm. ((Again, the invisibility thing would make this ability beyond OP. Also you need to state how many shadows.)) To the naked eye, anything the clone does appears to be the act of an invisible force.((refer to other comments on the invisibility)) The user is also capable of switching places with his shadows at any time. ((Having shadows that can attack, defend and bing targets already seems like quite a lot though that would all depend on this abilities strength/power in comparison to opponents however, being able to switch places with them seems like it should be it's own separate ability seeing as it would need a cooldown and such.)) Although they are invulnerable to most physical attacks, techniques which make use dark magic are able to harm the shadows. ((Like one of your previous abilities, you cannot have an ability be invulnerable to other forms of magic all together. You can say that it has increased resistance to another type of magic but that would have to be more specific. In addition to that comment, they cannot be invulnerable at all as other Master rank and higher abilities would and should be able to destroy this one.))
    Duration and cooldown: 4 Post duration, 5 post duration ((make this at least 6 please.))
    Strengths: Cannot be seen or sensed or harmed by physical attacks ((going to have to come up with some new strengths.))
    Weakness: The shadows can be partially combated by immobilizing or sealing the body in a way that it cannot move or act. They cannot use techniques of the user. ((probably going to have to change this up to according to how the ability will be as an approvable one.))

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