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    Blessing of Torag

    Post by That Guy on Sun Nov 30, 2014 2:00 pm

    Name: Blessing of Torag
    Rank: Transcendent
    Description: A Huge beam of light shines down on the subject granting them access to Demi-God power. It does not grant any other powers other than statistical upgrades for the duration of the spell. It raises the rank of the subject by one.
    Duration and cooldown: It will last for a total of three posts which cannot be used again until three posts after the spell ends.
    Strengths: The subject is temporarily above a tier than he normally is.
    This may be used in conjunction with Stalwart Defense in the same Post.
    This may be used on a player who has his favor even though Torag himself is not in the topic. With the exception of invite only, and closed topics.
    Weakness: Cannot be used on Gods, Demi-Gods, or himself sadly enough. Also it must be pointed out that the favor of Torag must be achieved. This is attained by several means. Crafting a masterwork craft in the name of Torag. Leading a battle strategy in the name of Torag, or bring a family up in a tight fellowship in his name. Even then, Torag must decide to answer their prayers with a yay or nay.

    Name: Stalwart Defense
    Rank: Transcendent
    Description: Adamantine warps out of the ground covering the user forming a heavy plate mail armor with a pair of arm-strapped tower shields that, strangely, gives the wielder proficiency in both defense and offense. This defense is meant to protect the subject to attacks and magic . The endurance is automatically boosted to block up to transcendent tier for the purposes of overcoming Physical and magical damage resistance. Torag may use this ability on another of his choosing, alongside (And in the same post) as his Blessing of Torag ability.

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    Duration and cooldown: It will last for a total of seven posts which cannot be used again until Seven posts after the spell activates. (See weakness for more)
    Strengths: The defense of the subject is considered capable of blocking everything but transcendent tier attacks for the duration of the spell.
    Weakness: Sadly, even though the cooldown is less than the duration, he can only have one subject cast at one time.  Meaning a post to dismiss the spell, and another to cast the spell again requires a 2 post window of opportunity if the subject needs to change immediately.
    The Tower shields are large and bulky, meaning that any weapons held by the PC are worthless behind the shields and cannot strike back. However the armor can be used to become a human cannonball.


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    Re: Blessing of Torag

    Post by Fabled Emperor Karna on Mon Dec 01, 2014 5:05 pm

    So basically this spell is used to promote the power of another user? If so, What rank of Demi-God tier would it make them?
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    Re: Blessing of Torag

    Post by That Guy on Tue Dec 02, 2014 9:18 pm

    Updated, basically no tier change. Just full rank change.
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    Re: Blessing of Torag

    Post by That Guy on Sat Dec 13, 2014 3:02 pm

    Updated to accomodate the new stat boosting rules Chose to try and shoot for three tiers boosting for the crazy weaknesses I placed.
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    Re: Blessing of Torag

    Post by That Guy on Sun Dec 14, 2014 4:46 pm

    Updated for the new tier system.
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    Re: Blessing of Torag

    Post by Wave Darkbright on Sun Dec 14, 2014 7:22 pm

    Ok first thing, change the wording on the first ability so it upgrades you by 1 rank instead of 3 tiers. Secondly on the second ability you should state that its capable of blocking abilities up to Transcender rank
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    Re: Blessing of Torag

    Post by That Guy on Sun Dec 14, 2014 10:19 pm

    Corrected
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    Re: Blessing of Torag

    Post by Wave Darkbright on Sun Dec 14, 2014 10:38 pm

    Make the ranks just say Transcender since abilities don't have tiers. And what happened to the description of your first ability? One thing I overlooked, the cooldown is gonna have to be at least the same amount as the duration for the second ability.
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    Re: Blessing of Torag

    Post by That Guy on Sun Dec 14, 2014 10:46 pm

    After looking it over, its unnecessarily worded. Its a flat buff spell... So lets simplify things for the sake of clarity and redo it.

    And made the following corrections... Sorry for being blunt, but this is me getting a feel of What is allowed and what is not, so that when I start app grading, I know what I am doing.
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    Re: Blessing of Torag

    Post by Wave Darkbright on Sun Dec 14, 2014 11:12 pm

    Approved go nuts

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